is there anyway to delete all data because I already got to the end of whats been made so far and now upon attempted replay after splitting up with eleanor the scene with catherine and that pale dude (can't remember his name) teasing chapter 7 starts playing.
I haven't played this game in a suuuuper long time glad I found it again, I hope we get to domm the arrogant blonde elf if its not in the recent one because he deserves it <3
I really like this. the scenes are hot, the characters are fun and the writing is better than I really expected and it already seemed to be above most similar games.
a few things i feel the need to point out however. while there's evidently a fair amount of attempts of being inclusive there are moments where it feels like Catherine is talking over marginalized people, the "futa" stuff could use a re-write as certain parts feels potentially harmful towards trans people and the SPOILER slave bit seems confused in these similar aspects. like i get the force-femming thing and that the artist shut down any potential of customization but there's still things that could probably be done to avoid harm.
overall I'm still very impressed with what I've played so far.
Unfortunately there is an issue with Android 11 and Unity as it chamged the way Android does a lot of stuff. We'll have to wait for a fix for Unity, as Google are unlikely to change anything
Do you know if I can transfer my save from android to PC? I switched phones and my new one doesn't support the game unfortunately. And if I can what file would I need to move?
Hmmm... It technically is possible, I think. The save files are saved separately and they're the same as on PC. But Unity handles the specific paths in the devices, so I don't really know where exactly the files are stored on android. or if you can even access them. But, if you do start from scratch, you can hold S on your keyboard. It will skip all text and stop whenever you need to make a decision. You can get to the latest chapter in a few minutes using that.
I gave up initially but I gave it a second go after installing the PC version. Turns out my saves were under Android/data/com.DuplicaDinamica.ProductName/files so I'd been looking for the wrong folder the whole time (I assumed it would be under something like NecroBunny or rotw). Didn't have any issues copying the files over directly from there
My sadly necessary disclaimer in all of my reviews:
I love your game and as you don’t charge us money for it, I’ve officially have to say, that I love you for that. As you see – I’m totally thinking you earned every bit of reward you can get. But in my situation as a married lesbian which could not come out due to thousands conservative circumstances I’m happy I can at least have fun with your game. My husband would never approve of me spending money for those games. So thank you sooo much for even giving me this game for free.
Also: I’m from Germany and so my rating may have grammar and a lot of spelling errors in it – sorry for that.
First things first: 5 Stars are well earned. Your Artworks are outstanding and the way you write is extremely good. Especially for non-native speakers which sometimes might be forgotten but I was having a blast being able to read and understand everything with your clear words, exquisite writingstyle and the fact that the characters are really different. I totally felt in love with Kyo as I have a very secretive kink for how woman smoking. She also is soo mysterious, I cannot see enough from her and I absolutely enjoyed all of the scenes and especially the sexscenes with her.
I love that we are able to modify our characters with outfits and some hairdo, thank you so much for that and I’d love to see more of it. I’m also looking totally forward to see what is alchemy and so on about and the inventory. And I’m soooo eager to reveal all the missing kinks that are ??? right now.
Also I’d like to say that I absolutely loved the Jean/Jeanne-Plot and what happens to him with the transformation. For me this is especially hot and a veeery loved kink I cannot stop enjoying it. I would also have loved the possibility to interact in that genderbending transformation and maybe helped “designing” his new body with some questions to answer.
Once again I have to praise your writing skill as I – as a lesbian - totally loved the maleXfemale as they’re so well written. The futa-content is also great, thank you for such wonderful und such erotic lines between and that they are all seem to happy loving each other.
Love, Bella, a new and totally addicted fan of your work.
I downloaded the android version of the game and the main menu is bugged because I can't see any of the main menu interactions. Could you please fix it?
Is it really the long loading required to open this game? because I'm stuck being drawn after UNITY, there's nothing written except the village background & the name of the game.
What platform are you using? The game loads instantly so it's something else going on. If you're on PC you could try running as administrator. If you're on Android, you probably have version 11 and the game doesn't run on that one.
Hmm. It usually runs on Android 10 but in some rare cases, it doesn't. But there's nothing that can be done really, other than waiting for Unity or Google to give us a workaround to the latest changes they made.
I just encountered that on Android 11, Samsung A12. Not a gaming phone but it should handle it. Is it a change in Android or something, I've also noticed several older Renpy games off the App Store, like NomNomNami's games don't work on this phone either.
Android changed the way permissions for creating files work in a bid to make their phones more secure. Ended up making tons of apps just not work anymore. I have no way of fixing that through unity, so there isn't much I can do until Unity or Google come up with a solution.
There's a lot to like about this game. Beautiful art, great score, and the characters and relations are so interesting that I think about them even when I'm not playing the game.
This game has given me much joy. Thank you for making it ♥
I played the first four chapters on mac, and then downloaded the fifth when it came out. It made a new file of the game (rise of the white flower 2) and when I opened I had all my progress saved. so when I downloaded chapter six it made another copy (rise of the white flower 3) but when I open the game to play it doesn't have any of my progress. it starts at the beginning of the game. Is there a way to avoid this/update the game without downloading a completely new version?
Ah. That is due to unity spontaneously deciding to change the save path on Mac.
The game save files were originally kept in this location on Mac: '~/Library/Application Support/com.Company.ProductName'
But the latest version of unity changed it to the one used on Windows which is: '~/Library/Application Support/com.NecroBunnyStudios.RiseoftheWhiteFlower'
You would have to copy the files from the first location into the second one. But frankly, you can also just hold the S key to skip all text. Using that you should be able to get to chapter 6 in just a few minutes.
Samsung Galaxy Note 10+ and it doesn't show a menu to start the game but there's a cursor if I hover over the left side of the menu screen almost like they are invisible.
Just finished chapter 6 and I say this is one of the best visual novels I played in a good while. I know people have said this before but I love how the characters all have their own backstories, personality, and aren't just one-dimensional characters. I really love the world-building in this game and how this world is filled with history, how different races worked around the wars and many more. I also have a suggestion, how about a pegging scene with one of the boys? I've had the idea in my head after getting to know Labashi and thought 'What if instead of always being this arrogant and dominant man he is now the sub, the one begging to cum in front of us'. (You also don't have to Labashi, he was just the first guy I thought about when thinking about a pegging scene)
Thank you! Glad to hear you enjoyed it. <3 But hmm... I don't think we'll be adding pegging to the game. It's not really my cup of tea so I don't think I would be able to write a good scene.
oh and also, as a quick idea, you could update the part where it says info about the characters (for example, it still shows catherine and eleanor as novices and adventurers). Like, make it to update every time something changes or new information is revealed (like Kyo and other character´s kinks). I don´t think it´d be that hard and it´s a really nice and underused feature imo.
Also was curious if the alchemy, inventory and that were going to even be used or are just there as dumped ideas, no complaints I just want to know
I have a question, is there any way to like, see all the other messages you put with catherine at the end of the final chapter? they´re funny as fuck, honestly one of my favorite parts, but only could see the ones for chapter 4 and 6 and I so want to see the others
I hope it gets to be a thing, though I know developing this is not easy. It just feels like a waste of work, such funny interactions being left in the void to never be seen again, but yeah obviously you do you
sooo I just loaded my save and something went wrong, I appear on the map and when I click to go into the next quest (going out to find silver eye with the other girl) it just stays frozen with catherine in her house and no text, it can´t advance. I´m guessing something must´ve corrupted or I saved in a specific frame while changing areas that glitched it, but I wanted to try luck if there´s any way of saving it. if not well, at least coming to comment this made me notice chapter 6 is out
nvm it fixed itself the third time I opened it, don´t know why, well now I have chpt 6 so that´s neat, keep up the amazing work, this game really is something else
It isn't normal. Check if you have enough space to install it. Also, I've heard that downloading on a pc and then transferring to the device might help.
When google fixes it or I get a workaround from unity. I've been told that it is working again in the latest version of Android, so maybe not too long now.
Having the same problem on galaxy 9+ game downloads and loads up but no menu options 😭 I can click around on the left side where I'm assuming the buttons should be but nothing is there..game looks interesting hope Google fixes it or unity hooks you up with that work around.
Hi, i would like to know if it's a issue of the game or my pone but when i'm trying to install it says that there's and error analyzing the files (when i'm trying to install it), oh and my phone is and Android 9, thanks for your time
Hmmm. The only issue I know of is that the game doesn't work on android 11. But I never saw anything about not being able to install... Perhaps you don't have enough free space?
it always happens when games and apps installed from somewhere that isn´t your official store (google play or appstore). Your only choice is to be careful with what you download, games like this live on donations and things and they have a decent bussiness going so the devs wouldn´t risk it, but be careful with shady stuff.
I've tried to play this twice now and both times It loads up and nothing pops up in the main menu like start or options. Is there a way to fix this im Also playing on Android
Ah, don't worry about it. Thank you for helping out with the proofreading, it's much appreciated! I'll also be changing the format here on itch soon. I want to change the comment section into an actual forum since the volume of messages is getting a little high. :P
Always put a comma after "which" since it introduces a subordinate clause.
"And, unlike most of the taverns in this part of town, Jacques stocked only fresh and good quality ingredients, which made Catherine's job far easier." - missing comma.
No, you would not put a comma after "which". The comma after "ingredients" is sufficient to indicate a subordinate clause. A comma after "which" would simply be ungrammatical.
No, that is not a safe rule of thumb. If there were another clause between "but" and "she prepared it masterfully", one would need a comma. (e.g. "It was quite a simple dish, but, as she'd done many times before, she prepared it masterfully.")
As it stands, however, an additional comma would be incorrect.
We have 2 facts: 1 it was a simple dish and despite that (in other words "but") 2 she prepared it exceptionally well.
I understood it as praising her cooking skills and Catherine still giving it her all in terms of skill despite the simplicity of the dish on its own. You'd get the same opposition by breaking the structure into 2 sentences and using "However, ...".
I'd get the meaning of "It trivially easy to make, especially for someone with her cooking skills.", if the quoted text had "and" instead of "but".
Then again, maybe it's the influence of my mother tongue showing here - it strictly requires a comma after every clause.
Either way, I'm genuinely at loss, so would you mind explaining in more detail?
"But" is a coordinating conjunction connecting two independent clauses. The sentence structure is [Clause 1][Comma][Coord. Conjunction][Clause 2]. There is no comma that follows the coordinating conjunction.
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is there anyway to delete all data because I already got to the end of whats been made so far and now upon attempted replay after splitting up with eleanor the scene with catherine and that pale dude (can't remember his name) teasing chapter 7 starts playing.
That... Shouldn't happen... I'll take a look at it.
In the meantime, the saves are here: C:\Users\<local username>\AppData\LocalLow\Necro Bunny Studios\Rise of the White Flower
Thanks!
I haven't played this game in a suuuuper long time glad I found it again, I hope we get to domm the arrogant blonde elf if its not in the recent one because he deserves it <3
Is there animations for the android version?
I really like this. the scenes are hot, the characters are fun and the writing is better than I really expected and it already seemed to be above most similar games.
a few things i feel the need to point out however. while there's evidently a fair amount of attempts of being inclusive there are moments where it feels like Catherine is talking over marginalized people, the "futa" stuff could use a re-write as certain parts feels potentially harmful towards trans people and the SPOILER slave bit seems confused in these similar aspects. like i get the force-femming thing and that the artist shut down any potential of customization but there's still things that could probably be done to avoid harm.
overall I'm still very impressed with what I've played so far.
Then they avoid it?
Then this really isn't for people offended by a fantasy novel.
me android 11 stuck main screen
Unfortunately there is an issue with Android 11 and Unity as it chamged the way Android does a lot of stuff. We'll have to wait for a fix for Unity, as Google are unlikely to change anything
No support for 32 bit windows? :(
Do you know if I can transfer my save from android to PC? I switched phones and my new one doesn't support the game unfortunately. And if I can what file would I need to move?
Hmmm... It technically is possible, I think. The save files are saved separately and they're the same as on PC. But Unity handles the specific paths in the devices, so I don't really know where exactly the files are stored on android. or if you can even access them. But, if you do start from scratch, you can hold S on your keyboard. It will skip all text and stop whenever you need to make a decision. You can get to the latest chapter in a few minutes using that.
Alright thanks! I'll do some digging and see if I can find the file and if I can't, I don't mind enjoying the story again :)
I gave up initially but I gave it a second go after installing the PC version. Turns out my saves were under Android/data/com.DuplicaDinamica.ProductName/files so I'd been looking for the wrong folder the whole time (I assumed it would be under something like NecroBunny or rotw). Didn't have any issues copying the files over directly from there
Does this game has animations pal? 🤔
My sadly necessary disclaimer in all of my reviews:
I love your game and as you don’t charge us money for it, I’ve officially have to say, that I love you for that. As you see – I’m totally thinking you earned every bit of reward you can get. But in my situation as a married lesbian which could not come out due to thousands conservative circumstances I’m happy I can at least have fun with your game. My husband would never approve of me spending money for those games. So thank you sooo much for even giving me this game for free.
Also: I’m from Germany and so my rating may have grammar and a lot of spelling errors in it – sorry for that.
First things first: 5 Stars are well earned. Your Artworks are outstanding and the way you write is extremely good. Especially for non-native speakers which sometimes might be forgotten but I was having a blast being able to read and understand everything with your clear words, exquisite writingstyle and the fact that the characters are really different. I totally felt in love with Kyo as I have a very secretive kink for how woman smoking. She also is soo mysterious, I cannot see enough from her and I absolutely enjoyed all of the scenes and especially the sexscenes with her.
I love that we are able to modify our characters with outfits and some hairdo, thank you so much for that and I’d love to see more of it. I’m also looking totally forward to see what is alchemy and so on about and the inventory. And I’m soooo eager to reveal all the missing kinks that are ??? right now.
Also I’d like to say that I absolutely loved the Jean/Jeanne-Plot and what happens to him with the transformation. For me this is especially hot and a veeery loved kink I cannot stop enjoying it. I would also have loved the possibility to interact in that genderbending transformation and maybe helped “designing” his new body with some questions to answer.
Once again I have to praise your writing skill as I – as a lesbian - totally loved the maleXfemale as they’re so well written. The futa-content is also great, thank you for such wonderful und such erotic lines between and that they are all seem to happy loving each other.
Love, Bella, a new and totally addicted fan of your work.
Thank you so much for the lovely review, I'm glad to hear you enjoyed the game! <3
And I did want the player to be able to "design" Jean's new body, but the artist shut me down. D:
Sad - but surely understandable considering the workload, I guess? :D
is this game finished or will there still be more to come?
There's a lot more to come!
I downloaded the android version of the game and the main menu is bugged because I can't see any of the main menu interactions. Could you please fix it?
I've given up wanting to play this game on my handphone, So I use my sister's laptop 💀 Wish me luck.
Any plans for Android 11 compatibility?
I would love to, but it's out of my hands. Waiting on Unity and Google.
yeah I just read thru the comments, sucks man, this game looks awesome
love this game!gratitude for the wonder you guys make!
Glad to hear you enjoyed it! <3
can this game be played on ios or no?
No.
Is it really the long loading required to open this game? because I'm stuck being drawn after UNITY, there's nothing written except the village background & the name of the game.
Sorry Bad English
What platform are you using? The game loads instantly so it's something else going on. If you're on PC you could try running as administrator. If you're on Android, you probably have version 11 and the game doesn't run on that one.
My Android version is 10 (Realme 3 pro)
Hmm. It usually runs on Android 10 but in some rare cases, it doesn't. But there's nothing that can be done really, other than waiting for Unity or Google to give us a workaround to the latest changes they made.
Me android 11 stuck main screen
I just encountered that on Android 11, Samsung A12. Not a gaming phone but it should handle it. Is it a change in Android or something, I've also noticed several older Renpy games off the App Store, like NomNomNami's games don't work on this phone either.
Android changed the way permissions for creating files work in a bid to make their phones more secure. Ended up making tons of apps just not work anymore. I have no way of fixing that through unity, so there isn't much I can do until Unity or Google come up with a solution.
There's a lot to like about this game. Beautiful art, great score, and the characters and relations are so interesting that I think about them even when I'm not playing the game.
This game has given me much joy. Thank you for making it ♥
Happy to hear you're enjoying it! <3
Aaww Lena is so cute! ( ๑>ᴗ<๑ )
I feel like her romance has the potential to be the cutest one. I love her! You better give us those half elves !!
Thank you for giving us such a great game as well !
Hehe glad you're enjoying it! <3
Love the game! Please please please tell me something happens with Marius at some point!! <3
Chapter 7 is going to have a lot of him!
Yay! I love all the characters so far, but when he first arrived I was like "Oh hello~" want to frustrate him to the point where he just snaps!
I played the first four chapters on mac, and then downloaded the fifth when it came out. It made a new file of the game (rise of the white flower 2) and when I opened I had all my progress saved. so when I downloaded chapter six it made another copy (rise of the white flower 3) but when I open the game to play it doesn't have any of my progress. it starts at the beginning of the game. Is there a way to avoid this/update the game without downloading a completely new version?
Ah. That is due to unity spontaneously deciding to change the save path on Mac.
The game save files were originally kept in this location on Mac: '~/Library/Application Support/com.Company.ProductName'
But the latest version of unity changed it to the one used on Windows which is: '~/Library/Application Support/com.NecroBunnyStudios.RiseoftheWhiteFlower'
You would have to copy the files from the first location into the second one. But frankly, you can also just hold the S key to skip all text. Using that you should be able to get to chapter 6 in just a few minutes.
Didn't know you could do that, thank you. Great support
Is there a mega link because the link for Android didn't work pls help
Mega
Same Problem
can anyone please help me
On Android and the game won't start. Comes up on the main screen but no start options. Help?
Samsung Galaxy Note 10+ and it doesn't show a menu to start the game but there's a cursor if I hover over the left side of the menu screen almost like they are invisible.
same problem here 😔
Just finished chapter 6 and I say this is one of the best visual novels I played in a good while. I know people have said this before but I love how the characters all have their own backstories, personality, and aren't just one-dimensional characters. I really love the world-building in this game and how this world is filled with history, how different races worked around the wars and many more. I also have a suggestion, how about a pegging scene with one of the boys? I've had the idea in my head after getting to know Labashi and thought 'What if instead of always being this arrogant and dominant man he is now the sub, the one begging to cum in front of us'. (You also don't have to Labashi, he was just the first guy I thought about when thinking about a pegging scene)
Thank you! Glad to hear you enjoyed it. <3
But hmm... I don't think we'll be adding pegging to the game. It's not really my cup of tea so I don't think I would be able to write a good scene.
oh and also, as a quick idea, you could update the part where it says info about the characters (for example, it still shows catherine and eleanor as novices and adventurers). Like, make it to update every time something changes or new information is revealed (like Kyo and other character´s kinks). I don´t think it´d be that hard and it´s a really nice and underused feature imo.
Also was curious if the alchemy, inventory and that were going to even be used or are just there as dumped ideas, no complaints I just want to know
Yes, I've been meaning to do that but there never seems to be enough time.
The alchemy system is being integrated into the tavern system that is coming next chapter.
Damn I finished chpt 6 already, it felt so quick.
I have a question, is there any way to like, see all the other messages you put with catherine at the end of the final chapter? they´re funny as fuck, honestly one of my favorite parts, but only could see the ones for chapter 4 and 6 and I so want to see the others
Hmmm... There is no way to see the older ones, but I do have them saved. I could put them on a scene gallery of sorts.
I hope it gets to be a thing, though I know developing this is not easy. It just feels like a waste of work, such funny interactions being left in the void to never be seen again, but yeah obviously you do you
sooo I just loaded my save and something went wrong, I appear on the map and when I click to go into the next quest (going out to find silver eye with the other girl) it just stays frozen with catherine in her house and no text, it can´t advance. I´m guessing something must´ve corrupted or I saved in a specific frame while changing areas that glitched it, but I wanted to try luck if there´s any way of saving it. if not well, at least coming to comment this made me notice chapter 6 is out
nvm it fixed itself the third time I opened it, don´t know why, well now I have chpt 6 so that´s neat, keep up the amazing work, this game really is something else
This game will not finish loading on my Galaxy Tab S6 LITE with Android 11.
It hangs at the splash screen and will not run.
It is normal that it does not let me install the game, it downloads it by drive but it does not let me install it.
It isn't normal. Check if you have enough space to install it. Also, I've heard that downloading on a pc and then transferring to the device might help.
Cant see main menu on Android. Video
I have the same problem, haven't been able to play chapter 5.
Right now the game is not really working on android 11 and in some cases on android 10 too.
Got it. But then will it work? :)
When google fixes it or I get a workaround from unity. I've been told that it is working again in the latest version of Android, so maybe not too long now.
Having the same problem on galaxy 9+ game downloads and loads up but no menu options 😭 I can click around on the left side where I'm assuming the buttons should be but nothing is there..game looks interesting hope Google fixes it or unity hooks you up with that work around.
I'm trying to play on Windows 10, and I think I am missing something important. I just keep getting an empty main menu ;w;
Try running the game as administrator.
Yaay! It worked!!! Thank you! ^-^ <3
Hi, i would like to know if it's a issue of the game or my pone but when i'm trying to install it says that there's and error analyzing the files (when i'm trying to install it), oh and my phone is and Android 9, thanks for your time
Hmmm. The only issue I know of is that the game doesn't work on android 11. But I never saw anything about not being able to install... Perhaps you don't have enough free space?
I have 16.38 GB remaining, but no worries, i'll just wait for a next update and see if i can install it in a next one, thanks for the response btw
Are you installing from an apk or directly from google drive?
Also had issues installing mine but I got it resolved by installing via a downloaded apk.
Yeah, i downloaded the APK from Google drive, and tried yo install the Game boy clicking the notificación, the common procces basically
Hmmm... I promise there isn't? Really though, it's safe.
it always happens when games and apps installed from somewhere that isn´t your official store (google play or appstore). Your only choice is to be careful with what you download, games like this live on donations and things and they have a decent bussiness going so the devs wouldn´t risk it, but be careful with shady stuff.
I've tried to play this twice now and both times It loads up and nothing pops up in the main menu like start or options. Is there a way to fix this im Also playing on Android
Right now the game is not really working on android 11 and in some cases on android 10 too.
Was Chapter 6 public release postponed? When do you plan it?
BTW Thanks for your work, this VN is really immersive, it's my favourite!
It's coming soon! We just got a little delayed!
Sorry that I'm bugging you so much. Somehow I read slowly and with focus and once you're in scanning mode, it's difficult to stop. XD
Ah, don't worry about it. Thank you for helping out with the proofreading, it's much appreciated!
I'll also be changing the format here on itch soon. I want to change the comment section into an actual forum since the volume of messages is getting a little high. :P
In that case, glad I could help. :D
Of course a new release will be in the forefront rather than fixing old typos, take all the time you need. :)
And thank you for the offer of Discord, but I'm more comfortable with forums.
Always put a comma after "which" since it introduces a subordinate clause.
"And, unlike most of the taverns in this part of town, Jacques stocked only fresh and good quality ingredients, which made Catherine's job far easier." - missing comma.
No, you would not put a comma after "which". The comma after "ingredients" is sufficient to indicate a subordinate clause. A comma after "which" would simply be ungrammatical.
*Rereads.* Yes that's what I meant.
Thanks for catching that :) and sorry, it was late and I was tired by that point.
Commas usually come before "which", not after.
"It was quite a simple dish, but she prepared it masterfully." - missing comma.
It's a safe rule of thumb to put a comma after "but" 90% of the time.
No, that is not a safe rule of thumb. If there were another clause between "but" and "she prepared it masterfully", one would need a comma. (e.g. "It was quite a simple dish, but, as she'd done many times before, she prepared it masterfully.")
As it stands, however, an additional comma would be incorrect.*Confused.* I do not follow.
We have 2 facts: 1 it was a simple dish and despite that (in other words "but") 2 she prepared it exceptionally well.
I understood it as praising her cooking skills and Catherine still giving it her all in terms of skill despite the simplicity of the dish on its own. You'd get the same opposition by breaking the structure into 2 sentences and using "However, ...".
I'd get the meaning of "It trivially easy to make, especially for someone with her cooking skills.", if the quoted text had "and" instead of "but".
Then again, maybe it's the influence of my mother tongue showing here - it strictly requires a comma after every clause.
Either way, I'm genuinely at loss, so would you mind explaining in more detail?
"But" is a coordinating conjunction connecting two independent clauses. The sentence structure is [Clause 1][Comma][Coord. Conjunction][Clause 2]. There is no comma that follows the coordinating conjunction.
Ah, so the same mistake. *Facepalm.* XD
Of course the comma comes before "but", not after.
Thank you. :)
Lesson learned: make corrections when you're rested.
I'm starting to think whoever wrote this must have been rather tired at the time. XD
"With a smile on her lips and a song on her heart, Catherine began to work on her special."
You need the comma because it's an adjunct of manner and it should be "in her heart" since it's not that she has the lyrics tattooed on her chest.
Soon after that: "Catherine and Jacques looked at each other before shooting Eleanor and inquisitive glance."
It should be "an", not "and".