The investigation part with Catherine in the cathedral after the initial confrontation. If you apologize to the cleric, he'll question her laughter and her response is: "You just remind me a lot of my best friends." The following question is what kind of man said person is, so it should be "friend" in the quoted line since it's referring to a single person.
Chapter 3, if you accept the offer of a certain character: "Catherine got her answer almost immediately as a voice appeared on her head."
It should be "in her head", unless there's a tiny invisible creature actually on her forehead, which sounds funny as a possibility, but doesn't fit with telepathic communication.
I'm in chapter 3 and chose hugs twice (because it's cute and wholesome :D) and the sentence I spotted is about the person Catherine is teaching: "The young tiefling was being able to do everything on her own."
It's already in the past tense, so not only does "being" not flow naturally with the rest, it also breaks the agreement of tenses. Drop it. If you want to emphasize it's only temporary a construction like "this time" would work.
P.S. While I was taught a good deal about grammar, I'm not a native speaker. If my corrections ever feel off, do tell, I'd love to learn and improve. :)
A minor typo in conversation after the battle. Catherine speaking: "I... Might have cast a spell that was beyond my abilities, took some Feedback for my troubles." It should be "feedback".
Still the same orc fight, now with the orc leader taking a swing at the knight: "Eleanor did not take her eyes of the orc as he raised his axe to deliver another blow." It should be "off".
I spotted a few more typos. Still the fight with the orcs in chapter 2.
The first isn't strictly speaking a typo, but it stood out. Eleanor has the line: "So be it. FOR THE Empire!" before charging at the orcs. It would make more sense to have "EMPIRE" since I doubt she'd only scream the first 2 words.
A few pages later there's a paragraph about how the same woman will fight orcs not caught up in a web. The sentence is about the orcs: "All three started getting up at the same time, but Eleanor was the quicker of the tree." It should either be that she was the fastest of the 4 since all 4 combatants are in focus or that she was "quicker than the three orcs". I doubt a tree sprouted on the battlefield all of a sudden.
P.S. You probably figured this out already, but I saw I forgot to say this before. Animals like boars, deer and horses have hooves/hoofs. I wanted to mention it since I pointed out a problem last time, but forgot to add a solution.
And would it be possible to have a dedicated section for typos? It'll probably be easier to keep track of them in one place. Just an idea. :)
Ah, thank you for the corrections. We have a channel in our discord dedicated to typos, you're more than welcome to join us there.
I also corrected many, many typos since this version was released almost 3 months ago. I'll take a proper look at your suggestions when I have some time, but now we're busy getting Chapter 6 ready for the public release, which should come out tomorrow.
This is by far my favorite visual novel of all that i played, i love how the world is builded, the history about the wars the origins of the races, it feels alive in a whole other level, and the simplest things like the characters get sidetracked when they are chatting is just incredible, it feels so natural that You don't even notice it; like someone else said here, is a really good hit of fresh air seeing the characters actually transmitting emotions and having different ambitions, sorry if i'm exaggerating things, but I had to say it, keep up the good work man/guys and i hope i can play more of this game
It should work on 10. But there have been a few rare cases where it didn't work on it. And there is no loading at all, so if the game is not starting it's probably not working properly on your mobile.
All I could do I already did. Now it's up to Unity and Google to figure out how this is going to work and get me an update. Some people told me that the game is working on the latest version of Android, but it's not every phone that has access to that update yet.
I've seen people in the comments talking about how it's weird that you can't change the name, and how they know someone and all that, meanwhile my name's Catherine so I'm playing this just fine 😂
Hmmm... I think some of the outstanding kinks we have would be sub/dom, tentacles, futa, and transformation. I think this is the only place where we have a full list of kinks though.
Oh! Thanks so much! There are a few common kinks out there that I have traumatic experiences with, so I wanted to make sure before I played! I don't see any, so I'll definitely give this a look! I really appreciate the help! <3
hey, I have an important question but first I gotta say, Just finished chapter 4 and honestly I wanted to wait until it was finished or had a lot of progress, but I can´t the story is way too good, you wrote top tier really interesting characters for a story, not even taking into account is porn and that tends to be more flat, I´m so glad things like this exist. (and also I´m personally tilted at the oversaturation of just harem and corruption fantasies, seeing the characters treated as human beings is such a beautiful hit of fresh air.)
and sorry if someone asked already but I can´t see an answer. Is it possible to download chapter 5 and export the saves I had for chapter 4?
Thank you so much! I'm very happy to hear you enjoyed the game. <3
And you don't need to worry about it. The saves are kept in another folder entirely. So you can delete all the files of the game, download a newer version and all of your saves will still be there, no need to do anything.
Of course! It uses the default save file path of your computer, on windows it will be C:\Users\%username%\AppData\LocalLow\Necro Bunny Studios\Rise of the White Flower.
My only gripe is that you can't change the MC's name. I personally know someone named Catherine and it just gets uncomfortable every time her name pops up... and in this game, "Catherine" get's thrown around a lot!
Like I said, that means the game can't access the save file location, which is at ~/Library/Application Support/com.Company.ProductName. You need to give the game permission to read and write on that folder.
Well, it should be. I talked with a friend of mine that has a Mac and he said it's working fine, I don't know what is the problem but it is something on your end, not really sure what though.
is it possible to start romance with eleanor, cuz i did like 6 runs and i never had optons about starting romance with her, i only got them with the blood dancer was it?
She is the first to get the option as she is... A little more leaning with Catherine's sexcapedes. The other characters will be getting romance routes later on in the game, so don't worry Eleanor will have a romance route eventually.
The mc x victor moment is kinda short but he gonna appear again in chapter 6 right?!! Anyway, I love the new characters especially (spoiler) the new slave *wink*. Is there any moment with her tho? Anyway, I really love the story and stay safe!
there is, i opened kickstarter yesterday, and saw some adult game getting slot of backer, and I thought an idea, i tell these dev here at itch Io about that.
Also, how did you see my comment on other games xD
not to be one of those guys. but i did find a spelling error i just wanted to point out in the part where Catherine is making the obsidian tower in the field, comfort is spelled as confort.
I assume you are running the game on android 11? We're having trouble with that version since they changed how permissions work on that version of android. I've yet to find a solution to the problem, sorry.
In the latest release of the mac version the main menu appears blank except for the background, title, and a darker bar on the left side. When mousing over the darker bar on the left side, white lines appear as if your cursor was over an option but clicking doesn't do anything.
That sounds like the game is not having permission to get to the save file location. Try giving it permission to do that, on windows would be just running as administrator, not sure how it works on mac though
That sounds like the game is not having permission to get to the save file location. Try giving it permission to do that, on windows would be just running as administrator, not sure how it works on mac though.
I know this might break the current progression of things a little, but I'd really like it if there was more of Jean and Catherine pre "change" (brothel since he meant to come more already), the "illusion" stuff is so good... or even like, a 3 strikes/scenes you're out on the debt before total enslavement. but other than that really amazing work Necro Bunny and team, hats off to you guys for sure!
This one is probably a typo, but it's still the same quest only the dup defending their camp from orcs by barricading the camp. Eleanor speaking: "If they come mounted in wolves, don't think they are just like horses, they are as likely to kill you as the orc riding on top of it."
First, it should be "mounted on wolves" since they are using the animals for transport and not somehow embedded in their flesh as "in" suggests and second, I'd suggest changing the last bit to: "they are as likely to kill you as the orcs riding on top of them.", so you can keep the number agreement between multiple wolves and orcs since no single animal or rider are pointed out.
So far I'm greatly enjoying the game's story, rich setting and humor, so thank you. :D
However, boars do not have paws. Animals such as wolves and bears do.
The exact sentence while the MC and Eleanor are hunting a giant boar for a certain ingredient during their second quest goes like this: "Missing Eleanor by a hair, the wounded boar tried to turn to her but his wounds and his still slippery paws made him stagger and fall to the ground once more."
Also in the third paragraph of the same page you have: "She was now unbalanced and the boar was fresher than she would expect giving his wounds."
It should be "given" instead of "giving" since you're referring to the injury sustained a bit earlier and not once being inflicted right now, as suggested by the -ing form.
On the next page you have "Three spectral darts flew from Catherine towards the boar, the first two hit the right flank of the creature and the last one hit it on one of its legs." - not strickly speaking a mistake, but I would make more sense to stay consistent and keep referring to the animal as "he" since you've already been doing that for the entire encounter, plus saying "animal" would be more percise than "creature". That very inconsistency rears its head on the next page: "The boar let out a pitiful growl of pain as he tried desperately to get back on its feet."
Just wanted to let you know since all the examples jumped at me.
maybe it's one of those phones that can change aspect ratios by pinching the screen? Like some phones with notch/hole punch cameras can have the screen stop short if the missing area is a bother
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The investigation part with Catherine in the cathedral after the initial confrontation. If you apologize to the cleric, he'll question her laughter and her response is: "You just remind me a lot of my best friends." The following question is what kind of man said person is, so it should be "friend" in the quoted line since it's referring to a single person.
Would really want to play this game but it won't work on Android 11
Chapter 3, if you accept the offer of a certain character: "Catherine got her answer almost immediately as a voice appeared on her head."
It should be "in her head", unless there's a tiny invisible creature actually on her forehead, which sounds funny as a possibility, but doesn't fit with telepathic communication.
I'm in chapter 3 and chose hugs twice (because it's cute and wholesome :D) and the sentence I spotted is about the person Catherine is teaching: "The young tiefling was being able to do everything on her own."
It's already in the past tense, so not only does "being" not flow naturally with the rest, it also breaks the agreement of tenses. Drop it. If you want to emphasize it's only temporary a construction like "this time" would work.
P.S. While I was taught a good deal about grammar, I'm not a native speaker. If my corrections ever feel off, do tell, I'd love to learn and improve. :)
A minor typo in conversation after the battle. Catherine speaking: "I... Might have cast a spell that was beyond my abilities, took some Feedback for my troubles." It should be "feedback".
And Catherine moving to finish off the trapped orcs with black oil and saying: "I knew this would come in hand.", it should be "handy".
Still the same orc fight, now with the orc leader taking a swing at the knight: "Eleanor did not take her eyes of the orc as he raised his axe to deliver another blow." It should be "off".
I spotted a few more typos. Still the fight with the orcs in chapter 2.
The first isn't strictly speaking a typo, but it stood out. Eleanor has the line: "So be it. FOR THE Empire!" before charging at the orcs. It would make more sense to have "EMPIRE" since I doubt she'd only scream the first 2 words.
A few pages later there's a paragraph about how the same woman will fight orcs not caught up in a web. The sentence is about the orcs: "All three started getting up at the same time, but Eleanor was the quicker of the tree." It should either be that she was the fastest of the 4 since all 4 combatants are in focus or that she was "quicker than the three orcs". I doubt a tree sprouted on the battlefield all of a sudden.
P.S. You probably figured this out already, but I saw I forgot to say this before. Animals like boars, deer and horses have hooves/hoofs. I wanted to mention it since I pointed out a problem last time, but forgot to add a solution.
And would it be possible to have a dedicated section for typos? It'll probably be easier to keep track of them in one place. Just an idea. :)
Ah, thank you for the corrections. We have a channel in our discord dedicated to typos, you're more than welcome to join us there.
I also corrected many, many typos since this version was released almost 3 months ago. I'll take a proper look at your suggestions when I have some time, but now we're busy getting Chapter 6 ready for the public release, which should come out tomorrow.
Whe! is the public release? I hope the android bug is fixed i hhavent been able to play chapter 5
This is by far my favorite visual novel of all that i played, i love how the world is builded, the history about the wars the origins of the races, it feels alive in a whole other level, and the simplest things like the characters get sidetracked when they are chatting is just incredible, it feels so natural that You don't even notice it; like someone else said here, is a really good hit of fresh air seeing the characters actually transmitting emotions and having different ambitions, sorry if i'm exaggerating things, but I had to say it, keep up the good work man/guys and i hope i can play more of this game
Thank you so much!! We're really glad to hear that you enjoyed it! <3
So I know the patreon release for ch 6 happened about a week ago. Is there a timeframe for the public release?
It will come out next Friday!
Awesome, can't wait! Thanks for the quick response!
Can this game work on android 10?
Or the loading just take Soo long?
It should work on 10. But there have been a few rare cases where it didn't work on it. And there is no loading at all, so if the game is not starting it's probably not working properly on your mobile.
Soo how to get the game work property?
All I could do I already did. Now it's up to Unity and Google to figure out how this is going to work and get me an update. Some people told me that the game is working on the latest version of Android, but it's not every phone that has access to that update yet.
Soo i just gonna wait?
if i downloaded this will i get only chapter 5, or iam going to get all the chapters?
All of them.
I've seen people in the comments talking about how it's weird that you can't change the name, and how they know someone and all that, meanwhile my name's Catherine so I'm playing this just fine 😂
Congratulations. You played yourself.
Hello! I'm curious to know what kink content is present in this game, or is it all fairly vanilla?
Hmmm... I think some of the outstanding kinks we have would be sub/dom, tentacles, futa, and transformation. I think this is the only place where we have a full list of kinks though.
Oh! Thanks so much! There are a few common kinks out there that I have traumatic experiences with, so I wanted to make sure before I played! I don't see any, so I'll definitely give this a look! I really appreciate the help! <3
Where to download chapter 1 it does not show under the dev log and cant find it anywhere?
Chapter 5 has all the previous chapters too.
For some reason this game just won't load, it's stuck at the loading screen.
I've downloaded the file from here.
Chapter 5
Since there were no previous chapters available to download i assumed it was all 5 chapters
The game is not working on android 11 yet, sorry.
And yes, the game has all the chapters.
hey, I have an important question but first I gotta say, Just finished chapter 4 and honestly I wanted to wait until it was finished or had a lot of progress, but I can´t the story is way too good, you wrote top tier really interesting characters for a story, not even taking into account is porn and that tends to be more flat, I´m so glad things like this exist. (and also I´m personally tilted at the oversaturation of just harem and corruption fantasies, seeing the characters treated as human beings is such a beautiful hit of fresh air.)
and sorry if someone asked already but I can´t see an answer. Is it possible to download chapter 5 and export the saves I had for chapter 4?
Thank you so much! I'm very happy to hear you enjoyed the game. <3
And you don't need to worry about it. The saves are kept in another folder entirely. So you can delete all the files of the game, download a newer version and all of your saves will still be there, no need to do anything.
oh, nice, and may I ask where are the saves? just curious, or is it too complicated?
Of course! It uses the default save file path of your computer, on windows it will be C:\Users\%username%\AppData\LocalLow\Necro Bunny Studios\Rise of the White Flower.
strange question -havent played it yet- but is it possible to skip the male sex scenes and focus on a pure lesbian MC?
Yes!
Thank you for the reply I look forward to playing :D
We hope you enjoy it!
Is it possible to skip all sexual content in the game and just play the story? I love dnd but Im not interested in hentai
You can't skip all of it, but most of it.
My only gripe is that you can't change the MC's name. I personally know someone named Catherine and it just gets uncomfortable every time her name pops up... and in this game, "Catherine" get's thrown around a lot!
Hahahaha. Well, maybe we'll add the option when we get closer to finishing the game.
Im still stuck on the loading screen after strying many things. the only thing i notice though now. iswhen i move my cursor to the lef
Like I said, that means the game can't access the save file location, which is at ~/Library/Application Support/com.Company.ProductName. You need to give the game permission to read and write on that folder.
its read and write and still no work
Well, it should be. I talked with a friend of mine that has a Mac and he said it's working fine, I don't know what is the problem but it is something on your end, not really sure what though.
Im really sad :(
So am I, but I don't know what to tell you. D:
is it possible to start romance with eleanor, cuz i did like 6 runs and i never had optons about starting romance with her, i only got them with the blood dancer was it?
She is the first to get the option as she is... A little more leaning with Catherine's sexcapedes. The other characters will be getting romance routes later on in the game, so don't worry Eleanor will have a romance route eventually.
when I enjoy your game I will donate and support your content
Please fix I'm android 10 stuck in loading screen
The mc x victor moment is kinda short but he gonna appear again in chapter 6 right?!! Anyway, I love the new characters especially (spoiler) the new slave *wink*. Is there any moment with her tho? Anyway, I really love the story and stay safe!
When is the Android version gonna get fix?? :( i want to play it but it's stuck on the Loading screen with no Menu
I don't have a prevision, I still haven't been able to get the game to run on android 11. Sorry :(
Oh.. is it working with android 10 tho? I tried downloading it in my tablet too with android 7 but it says it's not compatible with the version.
Mm, what about you make a Kickstarter for this game? The graphics and story are solid so I think people will like it
We won't make a Kickstarter as we are funding the game through our Patreon page. But we're happy to hear that you liked it! <3
I've seen you say this on a bunch of posts. Any reason why?
Why what?
there is, i opened kickstarter yesterday, and saw some adult game getting slot of backer, and I thought an idea, i tell these dev here at itch Io about that.
Also, how did you see my comment on other games xD
Seeeee uhhh I uhh was uhhh browsing around
not to be one of those guys. but i did find a spelling error i just wanted to point out in the part where Catherine is making the obsidian tower in the field, comfort is spelled as confort.
Ah, thanks! I'll get it fixed!
Upon opening the game and getting to the main menu, all the options to start the game are blank and wont let you proceed. Android.
I assume you are running the game on android 11? We're having trouble with that version since they changed how permissions work on that version of android. I've yet to find a solution to the problem, sorry.
In the latest release of the mac version the main menu appears blank except for the background, title, and a darker bar on the left side. When mousing over the darker bar on the left side, white lines appear as if your cursor was over an option but clicking doesn't do anything.
That sounds like the game is not having permission to get to the save file location. Try giving it permission to do that, on windows would be just running as administrator, not sure how it works on mac though
chapter 1 where?
The download here has all the content.
I can't open it PC :( tried administor and compatibilities .
Does it give you any errors?
nope :( just symbol shows up and emptiness
Just a black screen? That's weird, I would expect at the very least for the main menu to show up before freezing. Hmm... What OS are you on?
Same for me, im on Mac OS, Mojave 10.14.6 and its just the starting screen. So no buttons. Just village background and the title in the top left
That sounds like the game is not having permission to get to the save file location. Try giving it permission to do that, on windows would be just running as administrator, not sure how it works on mac though.
Hmmm. That looks like unity itself is having a problem on your pc, perhaps due to a vc_redist problem or maybe even with directx.
for the android download, when will it be fixed? Or do I have to wait for the next release
I don't have a prediction on the fix for android 11. I still don't know how to fix it.
I know this might break the current progression of things a little, but I'd really like it if there was more of Jean and Catherine pre "change" (brothel since he meant to come more already), the "illusion" stuff is so good... or even like, a 3 strikes/scenes you're out on the debt before total enslavement. but other than that really amazing work Necro Bunny and team, hats off to you guys for sure!
Hmm... It's quite unlikely that we will be adding anymore scenes for Jean pre change anytime soon, sorry.
No worries! Thank you so much for putting in all your hard work already to put out such good stuff :3
Thank you! Glad you are enjoying it. <3
This one is probably a typo, but it's still the same quest only the dup defending their camp from orcs by barricading the camp. Eleanor speaking: "If they come mounted in wolves, don't think they are just like horses, they are as likely to kill you as the orc riding on top of it."
First, it should be "mounted on wolves" since they are using the animals for transport and not somehow embedded in their flesh as "in" suggests and second, I'd suggest changing the last bit to: "they are as likely to kill you as the orcs riding on top of them.", so you can keep the number agreement between multiple wolves and orcs since no single animal or rider are pointed out.
So far I'm greatly enjoying the game's story, rich setting and humor, so thank you. :D
However, boars do not have paws. Animals such as wolves and bears do.
The exact sentence while the MC and Eleanor are hunting a giant boar for a certain ingredient during their second quest goes like this: "Missing Eleanor by a hair, the wounded boar tried to turn to her but his wounds and his still slippery paws made him stagger and fall to the ground once more."
Also in the third paragraph of the same page you have: "She was now unbalanced and the boar was fresher than she would expect giving his wounds."
It should be "given" instead of "giving" since you're referring to the injury sustained a bit earlier and not once being inflicted right now, as suggested by the -ing form.
On the next page you have "Three spectral darts flew from Catherine towards the boar, the first two hit the right flank of the creature and the last one hit it on one of its legs." - not strickly speaking a mistake, but I would make more sense to stay consistent and keep referring to the animal as "he" since you've already been doing that for the entire encounter, plus saying "animal" would be more percise than "creature". That very inconsistency rears its head on the next page: "The boar let out a pitiful growl of pain as he tried desperately to get back on its feet."
Just wanted to let you know since all the examples jumped at me.
Oh thanks, I'll get those fixed!
You're welcome, glad I could help. :)
Hey I really want to play the game and was wondering how it is going on fixing it for android.
No luck yet for android 11, unfortunately.
Hello! Do you know how many total chapters you have planned? I apologize if this has already been asked, and I missed it!
We don't know for sure how many it's going to take, but anywhere from 8 to 12.
on Android I can't figure out how to save the game
What do you mean? You can click on the gear on the top right corner of the screen?
Hmmm... It seems that the resolution is wrong, that's weird. I'll take a look at it. Can you tell me the model of your device?
maybe it's one of those phones that can change aspect ratios by pinching the screen? Like some phones with notch/hole punch cameras can have the screen stop short if the missing area is a bother
it's a galaxy tab E if that is what you mean